Landon Gardner
Mr. Neuburger
Eng Comp 101-101
4 February 2013
Sensory Language
My Story
I was riding my black and white paint horse named duke, down the road one day I smelled a delicious smoky flavor. As I turned the corner to go home, I looked out in an open field and saw a big family gathered together having a BBQ. Riding by I couldn’t believe how many cars sat in the drive way, it looked like the parking lot of most churches on Christmas Sunday. I just passed the house when a tall, lanky man with light brown coconut hair stopped me and asked if I would like to come eat with them, since I had nothing to eat since early that morning and it was afternoon at this point I said, “Sure, I could use something to eat.”
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