i can defiantly tell you have been experience writing, man you used powerful words and i love the courtesy bravery and chivalry line, our day and age are missing that concept..i have allot to learn from you this semester
I truly mean it when I say that I thoroughly enjoyed this. This piece doesn't try too hard. It holds a great essence and meaning with such simple and forward statements. If I heard this at a poetry slam, I would snap my fingers.
i can defiantly tell you have been experience writing, man you used powerful words and i love the courtesy bravery and chivalry line, our day and age are missing that concept..i have allot to learn from you this semester
ReplyDeleteI truly mean it when I say that I thoroughly enjoyed this. This piece doesn't try too hard. It holds a great essence and meaning with such simple and forward statements. If I heard this at a poetry slam, I would snap my fingers.
ReplyDeletewow. powerful.
ReplyDeleteIt's nice to see that whatever you have gone through has not stopped you from being who you want to be. That in and of itself says so much about you.
ReplyDeletereally good poem feels like you have a old soul
ReplyDeletei like your picture... it goes with the tone of the poem well
ReplyDeleteBest poem to backdrop match than any of the others Ive read. Its creative and thoughtful too! Great job!
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