This is, for a lack of a better word, epic. The flow is such an incredible rhythm and it's beautiful statement. I love this. I'm snapping my fingers for you.
Max- incredibly talented. Those are two words that I can confidently use to describe you after reading this. I enjoyed reading your I am from poem, because it's unique. I know I'm not going to go read anyone elses that is similar. I like that- a lot! Great job!
I really liked this! I'm having a rough time interpreting it, though. Is it something along the lines of the earth, or a more specific location/brotherhood/what not?
Great use of words.
ReplyDeleteThis is, for a lack of a better word, epic. The flow is such an incredible rhythm and it's beautiful statement. I love this. I'm snapping my fingers for you.
ReplyDeleteIt tends to just kinda fall out of my head without thinking, this took maybe 5-6 minutes to write.
ReplyDeleteMax- incredibly talented. Those are two words that I can confidently use to describe you after reading this. I enjoyed reading your I am from poem, because it's unique. I know I'm not going to go read anyone elses that is similar. I like that- a lot! Great job!
ReplyDeleteThanks Haiden :)
ReplyDeleteYour poem gave me chills!! This my friend is a poem of epicness!!!
ReplyDeleteI really liked this! I'm having a rough time interpreting it, though. Is it something along the lines of the earth, or a more specific location/brotherhood/what not?
ReplyDeleteThis one really gets me! So much discription while at the same time being vague. Bravo!
ReplyDeleteVery nice! If that took you just a few miniutes, then this stuff must come naturally to you because that is good!
ReplyDeleteIncredible very powerful poem can tell your very talented! Great Job1
ReplyDeleteBasically the first part is about the indians. The rest of it is about our mom and where she is buried
ReplyDeletereally great poem! it captured my attention for sure
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