Cylene- I am from grandmas sheets blowing on the clothesline.-- These lines brought back some good memories. I liked your poem, because your poem has parts that I can relate to. I also enjoy that you take the turns life puts in front of you instead of detouring. Smiling through the rough times are often the best way to get through them!
Isn't it funny that when we think we can't go one anymore, we find the strength from somewhere, become mom and grandma and keep going. I am amazed daily by the strength and dignity of true women just like you.
i can see your a trooper that no matter what life throws at you, you keep going. it looks like you came up from a good family
ReplyDeleteI'm glad to see you had a good relationship with your grandmother. Its funny how they teach you so much
ReplyDeleteCylene- I am from grandmas sheets blowing on the clothesline.-- These lines brought back some good memories. I liked your poem, because your poem has parts that I can relate to. I also enjoy that you take the turns life puts in front of you instead of detouring. Smiling through the rough times are often the best way to get through them!
ReplyDeleteIsn't it funny that when we think we can't go one anymore, we find the strength from somewhere, become mom and grandma and keep going. I am amazed daily by the strength and dignity of true women just like you.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite part of this is how visceral it was. It stimulates the senses and has personal meaning. Perfect example of a successful poem.
ReplyDeleteGrandma sheets and blowing in the wind and the smell of fresh cut hay, can't beat it! Great Poem!
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