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I really enjoyed how you used colors as a comparison and metaphorical description of the things in your life. Super creative.
it painted a pretty good picture for me when i read it congrats on a good poem
I like the descriptions, well done.
Well thought out way to go.
I really liked your color idea! You made it work very well. You did very well with making me feel like i was there experiencing what you were.
quite interesting... very deep
Your poem almost allows me to close my eyes and see, hear, and even touch the things you describe. I really enjoy how you bring excitement to things that are often overlooked in the moment.
Very descriptive and easy to read
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ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed how you used colors as a comparison and metaphorical description of the things in your life. Super creative.
Deleteit painted a pretty good picture for me when i read it congrats on a good poem
ReplyDeleteI like the descriptions, well done.
ReplyDeleteWell thought out way to go.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your color idea! You made it work very well. You did very well with making me feel like i was there experiencing what you were.
ReplyDeletequite interesting... very deep
ReplyDeleteYour poem almost allows me to close my eyes and see, hear, and even touch the things you describe. I really enjoy how you bring excitement to things that are often overlooked in the moment.
ReplyDeleteVery descriptive and easy to read
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