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I am in love with line 11! What a simple twist on a classic game?? It holds so much significance and i'ts very powerful. Kudos!
I like the honesty and the humbleness, good job.
You did a very good job with your poem. I can tell you are very fond of dogs.
i almost read over line 11, there is way more to you than what meets the eyes, keep being honest i look forward to hearing more from you in class
sounds like you played alot with your sibblings
I am so proud of you and where you are from! It is such a pleasure to call you friend. There is so much in there that you didn't put it an I know you are (lol...maybe sometimes that can be our little secret) I love you!!!
can i get some homemade brownies
Very cool poem. I agree with all of the comments above. Also felt that it was creative!
My brothers used to do that to me, hide and never go seek. Took me forever to catch out, i just thought i was that good
I too was a victim of never beeing sought out in hide and seek
I am in love with line 11! What a simple twist on a classic game?? It holds so much significance and i'ts very powerful. Kudos!
ReplyDeleteI like the honesty and the humbleness, good job.
ReplyDeleteYou did a very good job with your poem. I can tell you are very fond of dogs.
ReplyDeletei almost read over line 11, there is way more to you than what meets the eyes, keep being honest i look forward to hearing more from you in class
ReplyDeletesounds like you played alot with your sibblings
ReplyDeleteI am so proud of you and where you are from! It is such a pleasure to call you friend. There is so much in there that you didn't put it an I know you are (lol...maybe sometimes that can be our little secret) I love you!!!
ReplyDeletecan i get some homemade brownies
ReplyDeleteVery cool poem. I agree with all of the comments above. Also felt that it was creative!
ReplyDeleteMy brothers used to do that to me, hide and never go seek. Took me forever to catch out, i just thought i was that good
ReplyDeleteI too was a victim of never beeing sought out in hide and seek
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